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Love - Hate Copy. . . by Dave Park "The Maverick Builder"

SPCA of Wake CoutyAnd I'm reminded of the days, many years ago, when I volunteered as a Pet Adoption Counselor with the SPCA. Looking back, I must have been training for what I do now. I had lots of enthusiasm. People often teased, "You're selling cats!" Sure enough, many visitors went up with a crate holding a furry bundle of joy.

Our Volunteer Coordinator kept reminding us, "Don't judge the visitors. You're not going home with this person. The adopter who drives you crazy may be the best thing that ever happened to a dog."

True.

And copy works the same way. We don't judge our friends the way their dogs and cats do. And we don't read our copy like our own customers.

I tell my own clients, "You may not like this copy. But you're not the target market, even if you think you resemble your clients."

Here are 3 reasons why.

1. Customers live on a different planet.

If you hang around the Internet, you develop a unique lifestyle. For instance, some of my best friends are people I've never met. We exchange emails and phone calls for years. My favorite web designer is an American living in Brazil.

And you hear the same promises over and over. "Bring traffic to your website." "Attract all the clients you can handle."

But if you're targeting ordinary people (i.e., those who have actually met their best friends in person), many of our ho-hum phrases will seem fresh and exciting.

"Hype-free marketing? I like that," purred an earth-dwelling prospect recently. "That's a whole new way of looking at marketing."

Your familiar phases will seem fresh and exciting to your target market.

2. Customers want to be sold.

They know you're not putting up websites and creating brochures so you'll feel good and collect gold stars for your Permanent Records.

And if they want your service, they're looking for reasons to say "yes." Think of all those Madison Avenue ads with the theme, "You deserve it." Or, "You're worth it." They're giving us permission to spend our money.

As long as you're tasteful and - drum roll - meeting their real needs, your customers will actually appreciate learning about what you offer.

3. Customers don't want to stop and think.

Some words and phrases slow us down. For some good examples, pick up your college textbooks and maybe a couple of academic journals. You'll see words like "moreover," "counterintuitive," "although," and more.

How did you read your college textbooks? I bet you read slowly, made marginal notes and hung on tight to your yellow highlighter pen.

Copy is key in marketing by The Maverick BuilderAlas, website visitors don't study our copy the same way. We have to help them create highlights and move along fast.

Which gets read more:

(a) "Although you can work very hard, you may not see results for a long time."

(b) "But you can work really hard and wait forever for results."

Bottom Line: Expect surprises when you unveil your copy to your clients, especially if you're new to marketing yourself.

 Maverick Rules!

Advantage Inspection Raleigh

. . .  performs the Nation's Best Home Inspection and provides the Nation's Only "No Denied Claims Warranty" available in the industry. For the last 18 years, Advantage Inspection has been the deciding factor for the people we serve:  Buyers, Sellers, Real Estate Agents and Home Inspectors.  Advantage Inspection Raleigh serves Raleigh, Durham and the Triangle area.

Dave Park 

Advantage Home Inspection Raleigh
"
more than just an inspection company!"
www.adrdu.com

 

Comment balloon 3 commentsDave Park • February 20 2010 08:59AM

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  Ahhh...overnight success....tuning up the site, keywords, SEO and bring it on...holding your breath does not work....patience....patience...consistent, persistent...ahhhhh

Posted by Sally K. & David L. Hanson, WI Real Estate Agents - Luxury - Divorce (EXP Realty 414-525-0563) over 10 years ago

Hey Sally and David!

Patience, Consistent and Persistent.  Wow what great tools for business and they have mainly been forgotten in our "click" button world today.  It does not have to be slow and steady but it should included PCP!  Thanks for the comment!

Maverick Rules!

Posted by Dave Park, "The Maverick Builder" (Advantage Inspection Raleigh) over 10 years ago

It takes a while even when you know what you are doing.  Keep putting up good content and you will be found!

Posted by Evelyn Johnston, The People You Know, Like and Trust! (Friends & Neighbors Real Estate) over 10 years ago

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